Feedback for Bersabeh
Libby Thompson
AESTHETIC
- Aesthetic relates well to content/vibe of the show
- Imagery and design support the text (but low contrast between the text and the image)
- Aesthetic is pretty consistent (maybe change middle image if there’s one of him eating with a pink sky behind him//it’s also the only one with Cartoon Network logo on it)
- Not super legible (try bumping up line weight and/or adding a text shadow) (also text comes a little close for comfort to the margins)
- I think type size is good and type face is as well but need heavier line weight/maybe different color/more intentional placement of text within image to make it more legible
- Also look at image quality, I think its gonna look pixelated at the larger sizes as it seems to be on the edge of pixilation already at these sizes
STRUCTURE
- Image seems to more of a priority than quote at the moment
- Switch this hierarchy
- Design seems to accommodate browser variability fairly well
TECHNICAL CHALLENGES
- Just make sure that youre maintaining a high level of contrast between image and text as the text moves through the image with the size changes
- All seems super feasible I think you can do this for sure!